I like that excerpt from Amalgememnon. I think this is one of those POVs that's really powerful in small doses - a flash fiction, maybe short interleaved chapters in a novel that uses something more conventional in general - but even a longish short story all in this tense would (for me, anyway) be hard to read.
I like that excerpt from Amalgememnon. I think this is one of those POVs that's really powerful in small doses - a flash fiction, maybe short interleaved chapters in a novel that uses something more conventional in general - but even a longish short story all in this tense would (for me, anyway) be hard to read.
Thank you for these great examples!