This is all very useful advice to maintain reader engagement, but I was confused by the second example. Shouldn't it be *B* telling A that "C really fancies them"? (Either that, or A and B need to be switched throughout the resulting exchanges.) Apologies for the pedantry!
This is all very useful advice to maintain reader engagement, but I was confused by the second example. Shouldn't it be *B* telling A that "C really fancies them"? (Either that, or A and B need to be switched throughout the resulting exchanges.) Apologies for the pedantry!